Tuesday, July 20, 2010

So how do you really think of us?

For an American moving to Florence, Italy at the end of their high school career, one would think this would be a tough transition for most. Not for 21 year old marketing director of Flying Dutchman Productions, Stefano Minoli. It has been a learning experience, realizing the vast difference between the two cultures he has now firsthand experienced. Minoli, a native of Rowayton, Connecticut split his time between there and New York City, New York for fourteen years of his life. After moving to Florence to attend law school, he understood what Italians thought of American tourists. “This is a difficult question to answer because I don’t tend to generalize any particular group of people. If I had to, I suppose I would classify Americans as ignorant, war hungry, and obese,” said Minoli. Since he considers himself both an American and an Italian, it is surprising to hear how harshly the Italian people view us. Though Minoli, once being an American citizen himself, has a heart and backtracks by saying, “Naturally, with MANY exceptions; I repeat, I hate generalizing.” Coming from an expat, he is able to distance himself with his European fashion sense. Dressed to kill, Minoli describes typical American garb as “clothes that fit terribly, baseball caps, white socks, clunky new balances, way too many colors, flip-flops from February to November, camera around their neck, city map in hand.” Do we all really dress like this? If so, get me to the mall!

1 comment:

  1. Christine,

    You have a good interview subject here - you just need more about HIM, and less about the trivial generalizations about Americans.

    I sense your interview questions were hijacked by a side topic that doesn't really help tell someone's story.

    Some questions about Stefano a reader naturally would have:
    Why law school in Florence?
    Is he still in law school or is he working full time at Flying Dutchman Productions?
    What is Flying Dutchman?
    What is his life like now, and does he intend to stay here?

    Some writerly things you need to work on:

    Example1: Your first sentence has no subject and doesn't really make sense. One way to fix it would be:
    Moving from Connecticut to Florence right after you graduate from high school would be a tough transition for most. But not for Stefano Minoli.

    Example2: "After moving to Florence to attend law school, he understood what Italians thought of American tourists." This is among several disjointed sentences you have - one part has no connection to the other. Law school does not connect with tourists.
    One way to fix it:
    After moving to Florence to attend law school, he realized that many Italians stereotype Americans.

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